On the 12th day of December

[Jason Kanter]

It's all about the meter, and whether its getting repeated at the end of
every stanza would add to the general good humor of the thing... something
along these lines? (all possible candidates for Day 1)

...and A fallboard that wouldn't stay up
...and A cracked bridge with very loose pins
...and A dead killer octave as well


On Dec 11, 2007 4:05 PM, Richard Brekne <ricb at pianostemmer.no> wrote:

> I agree.... its that first day thats not quite perfect...  I liked "and
> a cracked plate and several stuck keys".... but even that was not quite
> just the thing...   We have 18 days or so to ponder the matter... :)
>
> Pretty cool so far tho eh ??
>
> Cheers
> RicB
>
>
>    Oh, so close to perfectamundo ... but that last line ..... I think
>    going for the near-sound of the original is throwing it a little
>    wacky ... how about
>
>    "And a bunch of sluggish, sticky keys"
>
>    Alan Barnard
>    Salem, MO
>
>


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