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<font face="Arial">Terry and Paul, <br>
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You are right, of course, about the misuse of "their". <br>
<br>
Terry, while "their" is strictly a plural, it is considered
permissible (if inelegant) to use it where gender cannot be
specifed. Many expressions would otherwise become rather
cumbersome, with constant repetitions of "his or her" instead. <br>
<br>
However, in this instance (as you point out, Paul) the email
itseld DOES specify the gender, referring to "Mr M*** H*****". It
ought therefore to say "his".<br>
<br>
This email came from, not a university, but from the
administrative body responsible for processing applications to ALL
universities!<br>
<br>
The whole thing is stylistically poor as well as having real
errors. Why use the Passive Voice in that first sentence? And in a
clumsy way.<br>
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Best regards,<br>
<br>
David.<br>
<br>
P.S. I have the CELTA (Certificate in English Language Teaching to
Adults)<br>
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